Category Archives: Scholarship Writing

Teachers College seeks to recognize a broad range of talents and extend educatio

Teachers College seeks to recognize a broad range of talents and extend educational access through its funding sources in order to support the learning and success of a diverse, high achieving student body. If you would like to provide additional information that is pertinent to this institutional goal, please do so in the space below. (1750 characters)

The proposal does not offer a clear plan for addressing the space debris problem

The proposal does not offer a clear plan for addressing the space debris problem, the main task of the document. (By contrast, your oral presentation offers a better sense of a comprehensive project, and so I suggest that you look there to get an idea of what was missing from the main proposal itself.)
Please Revise and Edit the paper, based off the professors comments above. Use the Oral Presentation Powerpoint attached below as reccomended in comment. Please Highlight your changes

Teachers College seeks to recognize a broad range of talents and extend educatio

Teachers College seeks to recognize a broad range of talents and extend educational access through its funding sources in order to support the learning and success of a diverse, high achieving student body. If you would like to provide additional information that is pertinent to this institutional goal, please do so in the space below. (1750 characters)

The proposal does not offer a clear plan for addressing the space debris problem

The proposal does not offer a clear plan for addressing the space debris problem, the main task of the document. (By contrast, your oral presentation offers a better sense of a comprehensive project, and so I suggest that you look there to get an idea of what was missing from the main proposal itself.)
Please Revise and Edit the paper, based off the professors comments above. Use the Oral Presentation Powerpoint attached below as reccomended in comment. Please Highlight your changes

the essay question is what are your major accomplishments, and why do you consid

the essay question is what are your major accomplishments, and why do you consider them accomplishments. talk about the pandemic along with accomplishing another stressful semester with more obstacles of being home. however, talk about finding the strength to keep moving forward. whatever you guys like to add it can be personal ask me any questions to help as well.